You know I liked it from the start, and this final version is truly excellent. Of the additions, the moment with Londo and the woman is superb in a gut-wrenching way, as are the reflections on Vir and touching. And the final line remains as exquisite as ever.
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Date: 2009-07-24 10:16 am (UTC)