Gah! What a story! I almost wanted there to be more, but that was a great ending.
It was a brilliant resolution to the storyline, and a great use of canon concepts to de-possess Cooper. I had never thought of almost killing the host to drive out BOB, but it makes perfect sense given what happened to Leland. Your use of both Annie and Audrey was great, and the little physical details, particularly Audrey playing with the hem of her skirt, rang so true.
And speaking of, the characterizations! You really nailed everyone, particularly the physicality of the characters. All their odd little tics that make that universe so distinctive. The slash was wonderfully integrated into both the story line and existing canon, from the first desperate encounter to the horrible potential that the entire relationship was based on BOB, to that final, hopeful line.
God, but you're the most awesome person on the internet right now. This is the coolest un-Yuletide gift a girl has ever received.
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Date: 2010-05-24 04:28 am (UTC)It was a brilliant resolution to the storyline, and a great use of canon concepts to de-possess Cooper. I had never thought of almost killing the host to drive out BOB, but it makes perfect sense given what happened to Leland. Your use of both Annie and Audrey was great, and the little physical details, particularly Audrey playing with the hem of her skirt, rang so true.
And speaking of, the characterizations! You really nailed everyone, particularly the physicality of the characters. All their odd little tics that make that universe so distinctive. The slash was wonderfully integrated into both the story line and existing canon, from the first desperate encounter to the horrible potential that the entire relationship was based on BOB, to that final, hopeful line.
God, but you're the most awesome person on the internet right now. This is the coolest un-Yuletide gift a girl has ever received.