http://ingrid44.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ingrid44.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amatara 2009-09-20 05:04 am (UTC)

I so clearly saw the room, Londo and Vir together in my mind while I read this. You so ably captured Vir's tone of voice, his stuttering, his hesitation and his reluctance to tend Londo, yet in the end, it was so very much Vir. "They were going to be alright. He would make it all right."
Well done.

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