ext_15716 ([identity profile] heartequals.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] amatara 2010-06-24 10:23 pm (UTC)

CLUTCHING MY CHEST AND GRINNING FOR ALWAYS.

I adore what you do with Albert in this -- how he's always there, always somewhere in Cooper's periphery even as Cooper slowly overcomes his obsessive guilt and love. I love how Cooper stands out in this fic -- not the just the voice, but someone commented and mentioned the sentence structure? Got it in one. Cooper is all over this.

I also love that Diane plays a wonderfully invisible part in this! Perfect!

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