I adore what you do with Albert in this -- how he's always there, always somewhere in Cooper's periphery even as Cooper slowly overcomes his obsessive guilt and love. I love how Cooper stands out in this fic -- not the just the voice, but someone commented and mentioned the sentence structure? Got it in one. Cooper is all over this.
I also love that Diane plays a wonderfully invisible part in this! Perfect!
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I adore what you do with Albert in this -- how he's always there, always somewhere in Cooper's periphery even as Cooper slowly overcomes his obsessive guilt and love. I love how Cooper stands out in this fic -- not the just the voice, but someone commented and mentioned the sentence structure? Got it in one. Cooper is all over this.
I also love that Diane plays a wonderfully invisible part in this! Perfect!